Friday, May 20, 2011

Of Tiptoe

This one I wrote back in February and meant to post, but got too lazy. So, here we go.

For some reason when you tiptoe
Your steps come out louder than ever
You notice every crack of the floor
And the thump your foot makes
No matter how lightly you step
Your footsteps always seem to boom
Every step a shout out
For some reason when the world is silent
No footstep can escape notice

2 comments:

  1. i like that each of these 3 posts are 2 minutes apart.

    i like them. you write so well... <3

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  2. I love how the reader feels in sync with you as they read it. We follow along with your voice in our minds as your emotions swell in different pitches. Truly a work of art.

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