I grasped it for an instant
Felt like the sea spray against my face
Pounding the rocks with a boom like dynamite
Fresh like nothing before
But then Master Sand came
And blew it all away
Like thin strands
Seeds that had not yet grasped roots
And I drifted away into mindless sleep
Very descriptive. I cannot believe the ways in which you always manage to surprise me in your word-crafting abilities. This is on the level of Du Bartas. There is no place to go but up from here...
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